the forth week in BEL120 ;)

Monday: acts in musical way
my friend and i need to play a role that relate with the news topic,"run for cherity"
the script :) 
A group of member meet their friend. Unfortunetly, their friend in a trouble.
Izan   : Why you look so sad?
Izwan : I'm sick with my life,
           cancer are my enemy,
           i need some money for the bill and the payments
                       (song)
Mel    : so?
All      : Our friend in the trouble,
           our friend in the trouble,
           so help,help
                       (song)


                       scene run
All     : run baby run, dont ever give up (song)
Anis   : dont give up, its all about the money.
All     : its all about the money,money,money(song)
Then, the money collection are gives to Eira to pass to Izwan. for the end of the story, we have some song.
          you were my strength, when i was sick,
          you were my voice when i couldt speak,
          you were my ayes when i couldt see,
          you saw the best there was in me. 
                          (song)
p/s:love gLee so much! <3

Tuesday: reading day
In this day, my class learned about TOPIC SENTENCES. Topic sentences is one of the important thing in the essay. This topic sentences are located at each paragraph of essay. its contain topic and control idea. Topic is the main idea of essay. Control idea is each topic sentences in each paragraph.
Example:

1. One of the most important (reason why people wake up late)TOPIC in the morning is (staying up late at night)CONTROL IDEA. 
2. The thing which is of (utmost importance for every student)TOPIC is (consistency)CONTROL IDEA. We need to revise whatever we are taught daily. This will help us to retain when we have studied better. Consistent studying and revising will prevent us from missing out important details.

Precaution: Make sure the topic sentences does not have many controlling idea.


writing essay:
we can make our essay more interesting,coherant and smooth using the transition elements.
transitions are elements or words which are connecting idea to idea.
example:                                                     
                                                                  but
             Marcos loves to swim in the ocean    however               his parent not allow him.
                                                                  on the other hand
for longer writing, transition can be use to connect first and the second paragraph.
p/s: i always use this transitions in my essay but i do not know the name is "transition".hu3

wednesday: writing
today i've learn the easy way to make my essay interesting. they have some rules that we must to follow
first, we must have the topic sentences, supporting sentences, and the conclusion sentences.
secondly, our essay must in unity.
these are some examples expression to be use in the essay:

• as we can see
• in summary
• as a result
• these examples show that
• finally
• consequence
• therefore
• thus 

p/s:the conclusion is one the important thing that we'll be attract the reader to read our essay